Thursday, February 2, 2012

My holiday recount



When reading my story out loud I can use expression and speak clearly.


I need to work on not getting muddled up with my words.

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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!February 2, 2012 at 2:21 PM

    To Katie
    I like the way you used expression.
    From Christian

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  2. Powerful Learners in Room 7!February 2, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    To Katie
    I liked the way you had a loud vice and how it said it bucketed with rain. It was cool.
    from Megan

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  3. Mrs NatuschFebruary 6, 2012 at 3:31 PM

    To Katie
    You are a great speaker in front of the class because you speak clearly, use a loud voice and expression. I think you only got muddled with your words because it was still a draft piece of writing. I'm sure once you proof-read your recount and then practice it you will achieve your goal.
    Mrs N

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