Last Tuesday Night.

Hello,I'm going to tell you about one mysteries night.It all started after every one was fast asleep,At 8pm in a Big,slimy swamp there were three tided,sleepy frogs fast asleep an all of a sadden all the slimy frogs stared to fly on there Lilly pads!!


"Whoa whats happening!" said one of the frogs " I think i know whats happening " said anther frog " we're flying""wicked awesome" said bob "what sall we do now,Zack""no i deer but i know that tonight is going to by awesome!!"Jackie's legs was trembling" aah Jackie what are you doing" "Don't tell me your sacred,are you?" " No" " I know that voice"said Zack "Guys guys guys guys guys guys guys guys" said bob "What what what what what what what what what !!"Said Zack"what" said bob"d'oh"said Zack slapping his head than anther frog went past "Wwwwwwwweeeeeeeee!!"said dingo"Came on" "Dingo Bro!!" said bob lets Gggggooooo""OK!""Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!" "something is on me" said dingo" its just a white sheet" said Zack "Aah i new that" said dingo "man he's a dingo" said bob then bob went past a house"Hello" said bob"What the" said a man in the house.

Then the three fling frogs went into a haunted house and in the haunted house was an sleeping Lady and the  frogs started to watch TV and one of the frogs changed the Chanel with his tongue  bressing  the battens and then the frogs started to stop  fling and thay needed to hop back to the swamp and the detectives looked at the Lilly pads and thay did not know what happened and the frogs were not really happy and then the next Tuesday night pigs stared to fly oh no.

This is a draft piece of writing please leave a comment of what I did well and what I can do to make my writing better!!