Writing

The old mans Advechure

The sky was pinkie red and the clouds were drifting through the sky. The old man was imagining where he would end up.The Turtles keeped gliding through the red sky and finally thay come to an end and he was amazed where he ended up.The were so many after turtles and there was a huge clear,blue sea and he hopped off the big green turtle and found some where to rest for the night and made a little hut from wood and some things from a sunken ship and he stayed there for mouths and he had lots of food and water because he lived right next to a jungle and it was full of  fresh fruit then finally after six mouths there he was rested and token to hospital luckily nothing was wrong with him.

This is my draft piece of writing can you please make a comment so I can make my writing better!