Wow that's a big slide and I'm going to go down it! I said
"Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" I went down the big slide because it was so fun I went on it again and again!
"Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" I went down the big slide because it was so fun I went on it again and again!
Every time I went down the slide I always canon balled into the colorful balls The balls were as bright as the sun I always said.
Then it was time to go home and in the car I got sick from going down the slide to many times!
And that was the end of going to that slide!
The End
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And that was the end of going to that slide!
The End
This is my draft piece of writing please make a comment and tell me what I need to work on!
