Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Swimming poem

Splish Splosh Splash


I dash through the water

I splash down the lane

It's really really fun

Not really really dumb


I'm really happy that now we are doing diving


when I dived in it looked like I was hiding

Now we need to go back to school

but  I'm glad it was really really cool

By Katie :)
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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!December 3, 2012 at 11:30 AM

    To Katie
    I liked the way you used some rhyming words.
    Next time you could work on making your poem even better.
    I really enjoyed your poem!
    From Loren

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    1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!December 3, 2012 at 11:33 AM

      Hi Loren (who loves green)

      Thanks for your lovly comment and thanks for the feed back and feed ford and i will bye
      see ya soon
      please replay

      from your best best best friend (katie)

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